i like most of it. i love the beat a lot with the to combing. i don't however, like the red much. it needs more, it need oomph. One more thing. this title and the 7 below all rhyme with one another, i don't know if this is a gimmic, or including of about this "parilous journey" of yours, but it's weird.
Comment by: Caedron, posted: 2010-02-04 13:15:21
Seems no one noticed.
No one saw when it began.
The long perilous journey
Concludes in triumph once again.
